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Dec 04, 2009
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Pitiful Postulants
Celluloid statues that stand in the rain
hiding the tears in their eyes,
Christmas-Card people who cannot refrain
from keeping their thoughts in disguise
Slaves of the future who long to be free
shackled by chains of today,
apple-pie heros with no destiny
posing for window display
Jaded creations of souls yet unborn
mingling passion with pain,
weeping and moaning and acting forlorn
yet begging to do it again
Featureless faces with fairy-tale minds
dancing to songs of despair,
Puritan paupers still hoping to find
crosses of hatred to bear
Succulent sinners so desperate to pray
shriek as they fall to their knees,
feeling the wrath of a Godling at play
dying, his lust to appease
C. Lon R. Bruso
hiding the tears in their eyes,
Christmas-Card people who cannot refrain
from keeping their thoughts in disguise
Slaves of the future who long to be free
shackled by chains of today,
apple-pie heros with no destiny
posing for window display
Jaded creations of souls yet unborn
mingling passion with pain,
weeping and moaning and acting forlorn
yet begging to do it again
Featureless faces with fairy-tale minds
dancing to songs of despair,
Puritan paupers still hoping to find
crosses of hatred to bear
Succulent sinners so desperate to pray
shriek as they fall to their knees,
feeling the wrath of a Godling at play
dying, his lust to appease
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Dec 04, 2009
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Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Holy poem !! lol… I have
magics02
16 years 6 months ago
BEAUTIFUL