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Dec 03, 2009
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Winded Change
I'm so not sure what's going on
but, I'm destined to be, on my way;
curious, this mix of irony.
My sensibilities undress me,
sending me through every color...in any rainbow.
~
Un-honed traits return yield, first
I'll be the first in my field, to yield;
ironic, this mix of serendipity.
The wind graces everything with a touch,
so that it cannot turn a blind-eye...to what goes on.
~
Have I a grasp of the situation ?
Or, does it have a grasp of me ?
Serendipitous, is my mix of curiosity.
I'll try and observe, like the wind,
having me caress every color, in any rainbow...all at once.
but, I'm destined to be, on my way;
curious, this mix of irony.
My sensibilities undress me,
sending me through every color...in any rainbow.
~
Un-honed traits return yield, first
I'll be the first in my field, to yield;
ironic, this mix of serendipity.
The wind graces everything with a touch,
so that it cannot turn a blind-eye...to what goes on.
~
Have I a grasp of the situation ?
Or, does it have a grasp of me ?
Serendipitous, is my mix of curiosity.
I'll try and observe, like the wind,
having me caress every color, in any rainbow...all at once.
— docmaverick, Dec 03, 2009
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Critiques
Baz
16 years 6 months ago
Yes; yes
docmaverick
16 years 6 months ago
Yes sir....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 6 months ago
and so it goes.....
docmaverick
16 years 6 months ago
Thank-you....
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest DocWhat are you
docmaverick
16 years 6 months ago
Say, Jayne....