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Winded Change

I'm so not sure what's going on
but, I'm destined to be, on my way;
curious, this mix of irony.

My sensibilities undress me,
sending me through every color...in any rainbow.

~

Un-honed traits return yield, first
I'll be the first in my field, to yield;
ironic, this mix of serendipity.

The wind graces everything with a touch,
so that it cannot turn a blind-eye...to what goes on.

~

Have I a grasp of the situation ?
Or, does it have a grasp of me ?
Serendipitous, is my mix of curiosity.

I'll try and observe, like the wind,
having me caress every color, in any rainbow...all at once.
— docmaverick, Dec 03, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

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Baz

16 years 6 months ago

Yes; yes

At last, some one who has a command of punctuation! Oh sorry, great poem. Baz
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 6 months ago

Yes sir....

...finally, someone who wears the blues ! Sorry...great comment. Thanks. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 6 months ago

and so it goes.....

I like that....observe..like the wind...this is excellent once again...great!!
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 6 months ago

Thank-you....

...my number one fan ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest DocWhat are you

Dearest Doc What are you doing ... ? up there lol ... cause whatever your doing keep it up ... your writing is touching profound in your latest and its such a joy to watch ... love and hugs Jayne x x x x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 6 months ago

Say, Jayne....

...maybe you should read my next poem, to answer THAT question ! Thanks, for your support ! You're STILL a "diamond", in my eye. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.