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A Christmas Poem

The tiny Christmas tree
Glimmering like a thousand
colored stars
which seemed to wink and blink
at each individual child
With happiness instilled in
their tiny breasts,
and warmth from hot cocoa,
they raised their wee voices
in a carol.
It was at that moment,
with tears in my eyes,
I realized,
the little bastards
were off key.......

 

— mugsy, Dec 02, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

You really got me with your surprise ending... ROFL Always, Cat
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mugsy

16 years 6 months ago

Christmas Poem

"Thanks Cat, I wanted to do something both seasonal and different.-----
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

(((((((Mugsy)))))) You are

(((((((Mugsy)))))) You are incorrigible. And I love you for it. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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mugsy

16 years 6 months ago

Christmas Poem

"I am happy to amuse you Kalishana, your words are sweet music."