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no one reads my poems

i sit here and spill my guts.
telling poems and writings
just waiting to be judged

sitting, waiting, getting pissed off.
rage building, jealousy burning
wondering why no one reads.

am i really that bad?
does everyone look and turn away
why . just a simple why?
no friends in life,
no friends through computer.

rage continuously building.
self loathing, and hate.
my only friends,
the only ones who stick with me through thick and thin
maybe if i was dead people would read
maybe they would remember
maybe they would


maybe........
— thegodshatter2, Dec 01, 2009

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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Hello

I read your poem God shatter and I understand just where your coming from. Look within yourself not at whats displayed in front of your screen all the time. i joined this site and I also see certain people comment on other poems and may never comment on anothers. As for me I think anyone that writes is courageous and worthy of a read. I liked your poem Magics02
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themoonman

16 years 6 months ago

Shatter...

Your point is well made here, and there are many that come here and feel left out, I can only offer a solution... in order to grow as a poet, one must read, and if you read and offer your own suggestions on the other poets works here, they will be more interested in your writes... it is sad but true, even the best writers here, if they didn't make any comments would go virtually unnoticed. Give it some time and try to be patient... and offer your own suggestions, you will be surprised at how much that will help your own writing... you will begin to see things others are doing, or not doing, and it will in turn transform your own way of gathering words to display. one way of checking how many times a day your write has been read is to click on "general dashboard", then on the right under some highlighted titles is a tab... "view more details"... it will take you to your poetry and stories submitted with how many hits per day and a total number as well... if you have any questions, feel free to ask. Richard
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Great advice moon

That was great advice moon as there are so many poems to read on here and it is true not all the time someone may comment but I find all the diverstity in the writings just like in our world. Moon are you a mentor? Have a great day and you too Shatter Magics02
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RobertKnott

16 years 6 months ago

Hi.

Today i was ridiculed because i wore a plain, brown cloth cap. Kind of old-fashioned looking. It has no meaning really, but what i give it. Just because i didn't wear a baseball style cap that advertises for someone else, doesn't mean i didn't read other hats. Nor comment or ridicule what others wore. please... continue! do your thing.
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

YES!!!

Moon and Robert are telling you right, as myself. You start writing as much as you can it will get it all out even if you do not want to post it at the moment. It will come. Peace to you my friend your on your way to a better day.. God Shatter no more...for you matter and I adore... magics02
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zombie

15 years 11 months ago

hey

I can relate to this! I don't like when people don't comment me either! Good work! ZOMBIE A.K.A Avril