Confident Desire (mild sexual content)

lady turns out the lamp

enfolds him in her wings

puts away her vamp

takes him slowly down

to the velvet regions

where he collects her kisses

in legendairy leigons

soft and gently raining

holding him with her thighs

opens up her petals

drowning him in her sighs

letting the world slide away

in increments increasing

all the toil and trouble of this

demanding world unleashing...

— Candlewitch, Dec 01, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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Critiques

ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi ther cat

well well cat what a write this should turn a few heads i dont have an idea for a title yet will have to come back

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Ziggy

I found my title, "Confident Desire" will have to do until I can find another one. Thank you as always, for your unwavering support. Always, Cat

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 6 months ago

Erm is it hot in here...

Well yummy, can i have that for breakfast, lunch, dinner, tea, supper for appretif, starter, main course and dessert please?????!!!! I would huse the title Contentment in Humidity but that is me! That rain is turning to steam and all things have turned moist alright! A very vivid and lustful in espirt and energy here, soul sucking delight as it produces a lavish feast of passion on tray... take the lid off and you have a whole boar on the platter... spit roasted for sure! Got an apple in its gob too! Good write Cat and it is good to see you are pushing boundaries like only you can do! Dale :)

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Dale!

I can always count on you to bring laughter to my dreary day. Thank you for reading and your brilliant response. Yes sir, I am pushing the envelope and testing those boundaries. Always, Cat

iverhyck

16 years 6 months ago

Reply

My answer to all your questions is '+'. Very beautifully written. Konstantin.

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello Konstantin

I am very pleased that you visited my poetry page and that you liked my poem. Thank you very much for the comment and the stars! Always, Cat

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Big Sis

Its getting hot in here so take off all your clothes lol sorry that song popped into my head the joys of having young music played all round me ... I am home till monday thought I would come see what you are all doing ... my god this one drips with ... yum lol ... loved it huni love and hugs Jayne x x x

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Hey There Lil' Girl

I feel honored that you thought of me when you have so little time to be home. Thank you for your friendship, which is very dear to me. My thoughts are always with you and yours. Love, Cat

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Cat

I came back for another read and noticed something ... is leigons meant to be legions ? sorry I looked for another word in my dictionaries and couldnt find it ... maybe I am just daft lol love you huni Jayne x x

CyberSpace

16 years 6 months ago