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Like a lifeline

A smile thrown at me is enoughlike a lifeline you've thrown your loveA kiss blown my way would sufficeWill you repeat the same action twice  Now I'm lusting forand adorewanting morefrom you for surewant to kiss your lipsand clutch your hipsand shiver throughto my fingertips A note from you sealed with a kissWould grant my every single wishKind words, written by your fair handWould mean so much, but no one understands Now I'm lusting forand adorewanting morefrom you for surewant to kiss your lipsand clutch your hipsand shiver throughto my fingertips The signal that I thought you madeturned my legs to jelly todayI'm sure what you did was for meBut I see things others don't see   Now I'm lusting forand adorewanting morefrom you for sureStare into your eyesand grab your thighsjust ask me whyand I'll tell no lies.
— Millage, Dec 01, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Oooh. you nasty boy. sing

Oooh. you nasty boy. sing it to her, baby! ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

?????

Nasty? Me? Are you sure you have the right person? Why am I nasty? ;-) Thanks for checking it out Annabubs. Much love Millage x
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Millage

Never know whats behind a smile, Love or lust sometimes both. well written very descriptive ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Barbara

Thank you once again for your kind words. I really do appreicate you reading my work. Much love Millage x