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Nov 30, 2009
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Apple Tree
let us arrange the different pieces
onto the ways of the forgotten days
where dreams would dwell
on the beat down path
that space
where shadows lurked
and clouds shimmered
crimson gold onto the heart
let us build the tower
that will reach
all graspable possibilities
everything shall be nourished
and shall flourish
within the innocent temptation
there
everything held in a well balanced
potential of excitement
through the worrisome days
of the captive realm
let us climb
let us crawl
let us reach
attaining the steady palm within the spades
away from the window blown open
by the howling deceives
here
let us rest
the construction is done
with the attained fruit at hand
that which will soon be gone
onto the ways of the forgotten days
where dreams would dwell
on the beat down path
that space
where shadows lurked
and clouds shimmered
crimson gold onto the heart
let us build the tower
that will reach
all graspable possibilities
everything shall be nourished
and shall flourish
within the innocent temptation
there
everything held in a well balanced
potential of excitement
through the worrisome days
of the captive realm
let us climb
let us crawl
let us reach
attaining the steady palm within the spades
away from the window blown open
by the howling deceives
here
let us rest
the construction is done
with the attained fruit at hand
that which will soon be gone
— Layune, Nov 30, 2009
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poewriter58
16 years 5 months ago
layue
Layune
16 years 5 months ago
thanks for the comment and
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Layune