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Nov 30, 2009
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The Beast Of Sutters' Fen
Swirling thick about my door,
a Hellish fog can not obscure
the path that winds its way to Sutters' Fen
Dimly lit by glowing moss
that hangs from trees which reach across
a gulf of time that severs now from when
A swollen moon begins to rise
and gives pale light to Godless skies,
my plodding feet grow damp as I go deep
The evil that has lingered here
so many years, still nurtures fear
within the hearts of those who seldom sleep
A mournful howling that began
from throat of neither Beast nor Man
yet clearly sharing attributes of each,
grows in volume, fills the air
with snarls of terror and despair
that echo far beyond where they should reach
My fear gives way to stark surprise
as I begin to realize
these fiendish sounds are coming forth from me!
My clothing starts to shred and tear,
I snarl as clumps of mangy hair
spring forth from every inch of skin set free
My limbs grow twisted as the trees
which hide me like some foul disease
from the prying eyes of mortal men
and so it is I come to find
a painful truth within my mnd,
I am the Beast that lurks in Sutters' Fen!
C. Lon R. Bruso
a Hellish fog can not obscure
the path that winds its way to Sutters' Fen
Dimly lit by glowing moss
that hangs from trees which reach across
a gulf of time that severs now from when
A swollen moon begins to rise
and gives pale light to Godless skies,
my plodding feet grow damp as I go deep
The evil that has lingered here
so many years, still nurtures fear
within the hearts of those who seldom sleep
A mournful howling that began
from throat of neither Beast nor Man
yet clearly sharing attributes of each,
grows in volume, fills the air
with snarls of terror and despair
that echo far beyond where they should reach
My fear gives way to stark surprise
as I begin to realize
these fiendish sounds are coming forth from me!
My clothing starts to shred and tear,
I snarl as clumps of mangy hair
spring forth from every inch of skin set free
My limbs grow twisted as the trees
which hide me like some foul disease
from the prying eyes of mortal men
and so it is I come to find
a painful truth within my mnd,
I am the Beast that lurks in Sutters' Fen!
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Nov 30, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
hi Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you, dear Lady!
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
i bow before the beast and
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
And I thank you sincerely!
shazbat
16 years 6 months ago
Verily thou art the master,
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks, John!
Tam the Chanter
16 years 6 months ago
You old dawg, you
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks so much, Ian!
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you much, jayne!
Lunegirl
16 years 6 months ago
ooooooh i really liked this!
Race_9togo
16 years 6 months ago
Lonnie
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 6 months ago
rhythm and rhime given