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loved
loved
Nov 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You Just CaN'T

You Just CAn'T

 

You can't leave me

In the midst of the wood

As you alone enjoy

Your solitary walk

Down my mane

You can't leave me in the lurch

Let me remain unquenched

You enjoy your smile

As much as you may

But my love from flowing

Now can't stay

Smile if you may

But now let me

Have my way

 

 

 

 

— loved, Nov 30, 2009

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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

No way....

...would I leave you in the 'midst of the woods' when writng such lovely poems. Much love Millage x
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

MY THANKS

I OBSERVE you like my work i have only written 1750 poems this year here's another one i'd like to read you but yet i have not found my bearings do these guys pay also ? My pet subjects are Love, Sex, Kiss As I claim to be a specialist I still do not know, What love is? Do you know? You may perhaps Read all my Kiss and love poems To make an anthology Then perhaps you can take Some more time To learn about Love and kisses Then you needn't ask me As its been a long time Since any one read thee