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After all I have said....

You said he'll take you to a clubTell me you're not desperate for his loveI know he's more grown up than meMy childishness you can seeSo should I sit here alone in the pub. But I bet he can't make you laugh Like the way I could do to you in the past A drunken fumble in the queueI don't think is the way forward for youI'll sit on my own in the barWhile he shows off his flash carBut will you still like my Cortina too? And I suppose he'll be great in bedEven if not, I suspect those words may be said The smug bastard, grins at meScared to think of him with you down on your kneesHe slips his arm into yoursI'm frightened he will expect morePerhaps now you'll realise what you mean to me  And although I must walk awayHow on earth can I with your beauty on display I said "Don't you touch her again do you hear " Come into my arms you're safe now my dearIf I see him againHe'll know the meaning of painI claim i'll slit his throat from ear to ear   And after all that I have saidI could never let you end up in his bed.   
— Millage, Nov 30, 2009

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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Millage

A very in depth write. Not your usual type but still great just the same. Green eyed monster has raised his head and got the ball rolling on this one. Lol. Love Lyz. XX
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Indeed....

My honeypie. The green eyed monster was certainly out for this one and got it's hooks right in me. But after all, I am still the same (according to some caring, gentle), shy and clumsy guy as before! Thank you for your comments once more beautiful lady. Much love Millage x
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Hey

We all have that monster but my eyes are blue, lol, I wanted green but. I am glad you are fine, sounds like you are, and yes I believe you are the same guy as before, but you left out a great poet, must admit that. I will for you, lol. Love and goodnight dear one and piss that monster off. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear M

LMAO and I got one of each a green and a blue so who got ripped off Lyz ? ... Green eyed jester has his hat on tonight ... well done !! love and hugs Jayne x x
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Thanking you...........

.........Once again Jayne for reading this. Both my eyes are blue (well, sometimes red when I hit the booze) with some very handsome black rings around them! ;-) Much love Millage x