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September Journey

That first day we spent voyaging
a race through Illinois to Iowa
we stopped upon a bluff so high above
and saw the river for the first time in our lives
shining slow and strong below our picnic
and down we drove through dusk and night
past old steamboats and riverfronts
deer fleeing our approach
sleeping towns and villages sweeping by
barely seen

The second day we swept across Missouri
wet fields flying by through rain
in trains and convoys of cars and trucks
eating sandwiches for speed, cans of warm soda crisp
with bubbles
and when night fell we reached our quiet motel
a bright oasis of bed and food and lines of resting trucks
and fuel pumps
an island floodlit in the growing night

We spent our third day climbing sunny woodlands
up steep slopes of lonely hills laid down by fleeing ice
a thousand centuries ago and on their summits
open to a breathless endless sky we gazed across
a patchwork quilt of golden corn and soya bean
hammered sunlight spreading outward 
to horizon far below
and wondered why we'd never come this way before

that evening we ate inside a tiny piece of Mexico
at the center of a dusty midwest city
from bowls of heated lava rock all brimming
with peppers beef and pork and shrimp and spices
warm tortillas and spanish rice
washed down by crisp cold beer
ambrosia of Aztec gods
to end the long long day

our forth day out we bought a blanket woven on a reservation
blue and black and orange and red
and wound our way along a smaller river
winding clear and swift through windswept lands
of farm and forest and high plains
until we found a little town amid tall stands
of slowly turning windfarm turbines
where a round and jovial white-haired man
carved kaleidoscopes and oil wands in a little workshop
like some fairy cavern filled with wonders and good humor
and on the street outside a kind stranger gave us ripe tomatoes
from her garden
red as rubies sweet as candy
so we thanked The Tomato Lady
and that night we swam with shrieking little girls
celebrating a birthday in our motel's pool

The last day we left at dawn to travel
across an ancient crater smashed into the earth
seventy thousand millenia before
and in the midst of lonliness we stopped
to snap quick pictures of the blue and yellow hexes
painted on the sides of barns to keep away all evil
and where a peeling wooden sign said turn
we did
and spent our final afternoon
picnicking on prarie and
picking ancient shells
strange corals
and tiny sponges
from a fossil river estuary
laid down 300 million years ago

our last night we spent flying home across the dark
through wind and growing cold
our children all asleep in
quiet dreams of Iowa September
your hand in mine
we stopped to stretch in some small lay-by
and discovered all the
secret signs
conductors of the Underground Railway
once used to message fleeing slaves
and when we finally reached our home
we cried because we wished it could go on
for five days more,
or the rest of our lives

that was our vacation
how was yours?




— Race_9togo, Nov 30, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

What a journey.

Quite envious and you have written of your September Journey in such vividness that I at least never had to leave my chair to be right along side you both. How enjoyable this read was. Well done. Love Lyz. XX
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Lyz

It was a great vacation, for sure. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Jim

Glad you enjoyed your vacation as I enjoyed reading about it. Well done. Love Lyz. XX
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Lonnie

16 years 6 months ago

A tantalizing traveling tale!

Your vivid renderings of places seen and things done is like a poetic travelogue for the senses! Forceful and masterfully crafted! Well done!
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Lonnie

I have to say...Iowa really rocks. It has that mix of farm and city and wild spaces that epitomizes the midwest. Glad you enjoyed the ride. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

I agree with Lyz and Lonnie. I very much enjoyed this trip. My husband and I used to take motorcycle camping trips when we were younger and hadn't blown out our knees. Always, Cat
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

Hello Cat

Thank you for your kind comment. This was the first real vacation that we have taken in more than ten years, so it had - and still has - quite an effect on us. We have, let's say, been bitten by the travel bug. Glad you enjoyed this. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Jim

That was an epic holiday ... I cannot wait to get away and have one ... thanks for dragging me along on yours was a pleasure ... cannot see anything to fault well done love and hugs Jayne x x
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 6 months ago

LOL @ dragging

kicking and screaming, were we? heehee. Thanks for reading and enjoying Love you back Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 6 months ago

so vividly and so

so vividly and so expressively told .shan