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While Other Things Happen

The shoppers shop their lives away
while religions kneel to stop and pray
for the kids who sit on the couch all day
to watch music on TV

While just down the block not far away
is a young girl raped with scars to stay
when the men are done, she'll smile and say
"I'm fine, just let me be."

Across the street, another dies
just two floors up somebody cries
for a son that bleeds but holds to lies.
The gang wont set him free

But the shoppers shop their lives away
while religions kneel to stop and pray
for the kids who sit on the couch all day
to watch music on TV

Across the seas live hungered eyes
no food, no water, who hears thier cries?
No hero be? what man may rise
for the the hungry world we see?

While just next door, both night and day
the parents fight for kids who stray
they fight for custody to get their way
and ignore their childrens plea

Still.....
The shoppers shop their lives away
while religions kneel to stop and pray
for the kids who sit on the couch all day...

to watch music on TV
— The Voice, Nov 30, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

I think this poem would make great lyrics. It really says something about today's society. Always, Cat
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ngaioBeck

16 years 6 months ago

Things Happen

This is your best so far,(in my humble opinion) I personally love any verse with a repetition of a theme.We always return to what you have identified as a major flaw in our society.
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poewriter58

16 years 6 months ago

Wow

I felt every word of your poem. You are spot on with this one Chrys