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is there a day after or what tastes like cranberried truth?

 
The day after Thanksgiving
the rain has turned to snow
how pristine the whiteness of it all
after the bloody trail
the roast beast left behind;
and today is Black Friday,
the shopping frenzy again
begins
as if there is anything left
that
in the American way of life, is holy

Lest I forget, I bow my head and remember
when gratitude was a prayer and love
the only answer.

There is a logical fallacy when silence
flies away on fattened wing
when Quasimodo's bells
once again should begin to ring
and we're the fools
hungering for something
that
tastes of sweet, sweet bittersweet truth.



— Kailashana, Nov 27, 2009

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bjp

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Anna,

You do have the knack for making beauty from remnants and our squalored philosophy: Lest I forget, I bow my head and remember when gratitude was a prayer ... There is a logical fallacy when silence flies away on fattened wing when Quasimodo’s bells once again should begin to ring and we’re the fools hungering for something that tastes of sweet, sweet bittersweet truth. Brian
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Quillsvein1

16 years 6 months ago

A good poem and excellent

commentary on that foul phenomenon known as "Black Friday". At least a few of us can not behave like impoverished animals and simply stay away from the malls. And gratitude! That internal wheel of life so many have stuck on the jam of consumerism. Another blasting poem. You tell the truth with vivacity, whereas I would say most people tell it with timidity and fear. GB
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Wow

You do know how to hold the readers attention. I am glad for your quiet day. You should write a book, your life has so much to tell of. I enjoyed this and sorry for not wishing all a great Thanksgiving but now I hope you all had a great day, even though black Friday followed. Well done. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Mum

At some stage we all run from the truth be it in body or soul ... but there comes a time when we have to clear the bullshit you have to taste bittersweet truths ... you always write with such clarity and I loved this one a whole new take on what the holiday stands for ... I often wonder what it would be like to celebrate thanksgiving, Australia Day is hot and dry and the whole country gets pissed and watches cricket hows that for tradition oh and I forget the humble barby lol without which all the pissheads would starve lol love and hugs J x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

We all have crazy-fun family

We all have crazy-fun family and national traditions, I enjoy watching them all. Folks here were camped out in the snow waiting for stores to open... smiles and camaraderie abounding It's not easy to live with both feet on the ground, both eyes, head and heart open. It's not easy to live between worlds. Mum "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha