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Nov 27, 2009
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My lovely Jayne
My lovely JayneI call your nameWhenever you are feeling hurt I also feel your painMy lovely JayneI feel your painAgain. But I ask Hold on to me nowFor everything will be ok somehowHold on to me nowYes I ask You cannot walk away from my lifeAs you've become my soul mateI've told you so muchI cannot walk away from your lifeAs I feel so close to youYou're not far from my touch My lovely JayneI'll take your painYou know I would, If I could again and againMy lovely JayneGive me your painOr bane And I askHold on to me nowAnd grab the silver cotton wool cloud Hold on to me nowYes I ask You must not walk away from my lifeSo caring, so gentle, so kind I opened up to youI cannot walk away from your lifeIt would never cross my mind Unless you wished me too.
— Millage, Nov 27, 2009
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Seren
16 years 6 months ago
I am speachless … thanks
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
(((((((Millage))))))) How
Millage
16 years 6 months ago
Annabayyyyyybeeeeee!
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
They are ;) love and hugs J
Millage
16 years 6 months ago
I almost cried then....
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
WooHoo
Millage
16 years 6 months ago
Now I am blushing.....
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hi there nice words
Millage
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you