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My lovely Jayne

My lovely JayneI call your nameWhenever you are feeling hurt I also feel your painMy lovely JayneI feel your painAgain. But I ask Hold on to me nowFor everything will be ok somehowHold on to me nowYes I ask You cannot walk away from my lifeAs you've become my soul mateI've told you so muchI cannot walk away from your lifeAs I feel so close to youYou're not far from my touch My lovely JayneI'll take your painYou know I would, If I could again and againMy lovely JayneGive me your painOr bane And I askHold on to me nowAnd grab the silver cotton wool cloud  Hold on to me nowYes I ask You must not walk away from my lifeSo caring, so gentle, so kind I opened up to youI cannot walk away from your lifeIt would never cross my mind Unless you wished me too.
— Millage, Nov 27, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

I am speachless … thanks

I am speachless ... thanks mile man(hugs) your a good friend and am always an email away love and hugs and many thanks ...JayC x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

(((((((Millage))))))) How

(((((((Millage))))))) How could I not love U2? Jayne, if only our love could be converted to little healing light injections of well-being..... Hugs, Mom "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Annabayyyyyybeeeeee!

Both you and Jayne have been so very kind to me these past months on here. I was scared of posting any of my work, but you both have been truly wonderful with your kind words (and piss taking! Ha ha ha) :-D I am sooooooo hoping to meet you next year. I have a huge English hug here with your name written all over it! (But don't let S.C know! Ha ha ha ha ha) I sincerely thank you for everything. Putting up with my clumsy lines and 'longing'! :-D Much love Millage x
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

I almost cried then....

.....Was so frightened of posting this cos I was scared that it might of offended you. I am glad you liked it. And as I said "Unless you wished me to". You are stuck with me Kidda. Much love Millage x
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

WooHoo

A big lovey dovey heart of a man. Oh Millage, you are very sweet. What a treasure to write for our dear Jayne, now you have made her blush, lol. You keep up writing poetry, you do have a talent. Well done on this heartfelt piece. Love from Lyz. XX
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Now I am blushing.....

....At your kindness once more. You are far too nice to me my sweetheart. I thank you once again. Much love Millage x
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi there nice words

hi there nice words /sentiments gentle heart soft words ,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

Very much for your comments and five stars. You are too kind Zigs. Much love Millage x