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Nov 27, 2009
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November
A jasmine moon hangs like a hammock over Nishio.
Orion, polaris, antares; opaque diodes failing
to burn through this abandoned night.
From all these flyovers in all these cars, they whisper
of autonomous zones discovered in the municipal grounds
by the river.
History focused into a couple of naked bodies
striving for equilibrium
in the shadow of a glacier...
Orion, polaris, antares; opaque diodes failing
to burn through this abandoned night.
From all these flyovers in all these cars, they whisper
of autonomous zones discovered in the municipal grounds
by the river.
History focused into a couple of naked bodies
striving for equilibrium
in the shadow of a glacier...
— Heading South, Nov 27, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
the moon is dressed in
Ink Dragon
16 years 6 months ago
Hi Heading South,
Heading South
16 years 6 months ago
Hi Ink Dragon
odd molly
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Heading South. Your
Morgana Tragic…
16 years 6 months ago
Hello again