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SAKTHEEE2007
Nov 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My Candle to your Grief

 My Candle to your Grief

My candle is here to your grief  and
my hands are here to heal
My heart is weeping for your loss and
I am here to console
Raise my brothers from your dark
a light is waiting for you there
Your pains will be healed and cured  by
the gracious mercy of time and God
Your darkness  will hide in the  pit of efforts
Your glory will be flown in the peak of globe
My brothers shed not tears and
weep not for your pains
We are here always to help you in grieves and
our hundred  crores will always near to you 
                                    at all times of your need





My Poetic Candle to you to forget your dark past   11/9 Twin Towers Disaster My tearful homage to all martyrs of that 
tragic incident



— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 26, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

My Candle...

The effort you have put into letting us know how bad you felt for the victims and our country, shows through here. What is a hundred [crores]? You could say; " We are here always to help you in your [grief]." You might also use the poetic candle to light and help us see through the darkness. Nice job, ~ Gee
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SAKTHEEE2007

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Gee

Thanks Gee After a long time You came here to give me a comment Nice I welcome your comments one hundred Indian Souls are near to you Thanks Gee
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Very Nice

Hello Sakk I love this one it touches a very sensitive subject with me. That 911 day. I wrote a poem also for the victims and my friends cousin who was killed as he was a firefighter helping a paraplegic down the stairwell when the building collapsed. His body was found 7 months later and they recognized him by his St. Christopher medal around his neck. I wrote a poem on 9-12-09 in memory of all who passed and in tribute to this fine firefighter. May all the victims families find some peace inside on this tragic day they lost their loved ones and also for the innocent who were around those areas. I thank you for your works today sir, Profound read.