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History In My Arms...
Shakin' my soul, with that Boogie Woogie beat
Red-hot music can make me move my feet
Twangin' guitars, drums and maracas
Waltzes, jitterbugs, romantic cha-chas
There ain't nothing like holdin' my girl
And lettin' go the troubles of the world
My body swaying and feet hittin' the beat
Gettin' it right, and feelin' your heat
Watching you turn, your eyes on me
Sparklin' vision that I see
Feelin' your hands, trails of pleasure
Give you some back, for good measure
Crushed against your wrigglin' hips
Gettin' the message with just brushed lips
Hope I got the words all right
Promises for the back-half of night
So let's hear something slow and hot
I'm gonna give it all I got
Then we're leaving, steppin' on air
Flushed and feelin' so full of dare
Relivin' old, young nights
You are still such a pretty sight
We were somethin' then
Yes, we were...way back when
Critiques
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Gee