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suspended between two floors

suspended inside his web,
cocooned,
don't remember when
or how,
anymore

there are no corners here
no way out
no way in
but if we should be caught
in an elevator
somewhere in Canada
puppets
on a Greek Island
surrounded by cyan ocean
dripping with
just the two of us,
stuck between two floors,

give us time,
O Lord,
to finish what you started


— Kailashana, Nov 25, 2009

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Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Mum

my enemy time ... I seriously hate the bitch at the moment lol but its ok ... little scary actually across the miles of oceans minds calling ... at-one-ment ... ill explain that to you later you will never believe me lol love you Jayne x x x
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Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

brilliantly evocative

brilliantly evocative metaphors intensify the underlying emotion to a clostophobic palpability. Emerging to the prayer of hope. Masterful in it's brevity. Barry.......o...