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crypticbard
crypticbard
Nov 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Old Toy

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as a child once to a favoured toy
countless hours of pristine joy
but specifications of "growed up" ploy
memories of past pleasures now destroy




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— crypticbard, Nov 24, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Crypticbard

beautiful short write. I'm not sure about the meaning of 'but specifications of “growed up” ploy' but it is very good either way. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks

Thanks for your kind words of comment. You are much appreciated.