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loved
loved
Nov 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Arrive My Dearest

I arrive My Dearest

 

I arrive my dearest love

So far I was waiting for you

Now I know you do not want

With me to anything do

 

I am awaiting my love

As I always do

Wherever you may be

I shall remember you.

 

You were once the cynosure

Of my eyes,
Now no more

Where on this earth

Can you find anyone?

Whose eyes are like mine
A veritable goldmine. 

 

Please do say

Come into my life again

If you wish you still  may

 

 

 

— loved, Nov 24, 2009

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Loved

I love your poem. It was beautiful, beautiful, beautiful only this line if you will 'With me to anything do' i stumble a little. Otherwise it was beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
loved

loved

16 years 6 months ago

thanks

ur lovely adorable as you know how to others appreciate that what makes you a lovely LOVELIER mate
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Loved

Thats a lovely response it floored me. I had to read it again to make sure it was meant for me. I gonna copy it and keep. Your comment is precious. orgami's responses are also poetic. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
loved

loved

16 years 6 months ago

thanks

i thank thee for your exalted appreciation that was the least donation in poetic language I could make you are the one who poets does make