Just so you know

This we do because we love. Mum "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

This was a precious read I enjoyed it. Two things I would like to mention if you may is in this line 'hidden in shadow' there seem to be something missing maybe 'hidden in the shadow' and in this line 'of past,grip to hold and never' -- 'past, grip' should have a space. Otherwise its is perfect as you work often is. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara

As usual your work is spellbinding. It holds uncharted depths for me to discover. (and parallels my life right now.) Steve has taken a week of vacation days to be with me and take me to appointments. I just now asked him to read your poem, and he really liked it. I even got a kiss for it! Love, Cat p.s. I like hidden in shadow.

Look at this capacity! A tenderness of seriousness. With a maturity of word that hits like a birch, leaving an imprint of bark upon the skin. You are a lovely writer. And a writer who loves. When I wrote "The dysfunctional triangle and writing Or why we choose our bigamy serial". I was aware that it would be difficult. It sounds like a negative world view. The answer to Anna's question, which I paraphase to, "what then?", from the point of view of how we talk to each other, is that once we are aware of this complexity about communication, we are able to help ameliorate the potential harshness of its unfolding. Trying counts. You exceed in this gentleness each day. And here have added a sophisticated poetic dimension. Thank you. Higgliestly Bugs, Brian

let go, and never let them fall. "A blink counting sheep, and a blind path leading you home. Seemingly full of despair, you manage to make it alright in the end. ~ Gee

is most certainly a statement of love, a particular variety of love which one finds very rarely these days. The ability and willingness to stick with a person who is mighty, mighty difficult: "So saddened/that you receded/to a valley of silence/hidden in shadow/So weary/that a blink/counted sheep/that on a blind path would lead you home/in the complexities/of the so whens/and the so whats/there was heard/‘who cares?’ "I do" A nice, heartwarming poem. Nicely done Seren!

Understanding the non understandable I think that makes sense.

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