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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Nov 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You Touched my soul

You touched my soul

 

with your smile

 

I was alone

 

but now I walk

 

with head held high

 

lost in your

 

ocean blue eyes

 

 

 

Love is more then passion

 

it is all consuming

 

when you metamorphosise into one

 

and you go on that

 

journey of the inner self

 

to become one so completely

 

In heart mind soul and body

 

 

 

No matter how far we fall

 

into the darkness

 

of the unknown

 

we are bound together

 

in the labyrinth

 

of the circle of time

— Electric Blue, Nov 24, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Magz

Ahhh you write so beautifully ... you touch my spirit love you girl love Jayne x x edit forgot your stars lovely lol
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

you touched my soul

hi there ah wat a lovely write a soulmate found and wrote from that place ,,zigs
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Dalton

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Blue

It's been a while sorry. I love those final lines: "We are bound together In the labyrinth Of the circle of time" I love words like labyrinth, the endless tunnels, the underground world of the concious and the subconscious. In which is hidden the gift of sight and clear sight, the gift of the seer. And the idea that the gift of time travel is hidden in the brain as some Shaman believe. I like this poem alot and wouldn't change it. Love John X.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

You Touched my soul

John These words will and still remain forever in my heart my soul A labyrinth I am in always. The gift of a seer some have said to me often that I have insight to the heart and soul and time travel is in our inner and outer universe a shamen some have said of me too. But it is how I feel with my soulmate for me - us to reach these places beyond most can comprehend but I do feel that you can only find this with a true soulmate. Mystical am I in the arua of my soulmate drawn by an invisible chord through time of this world and others no matter what. Always Blue
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

… we are bound together in

... we are bound together in a labyrinth of time. How true this is of love, when two unite so completely there can be no division. It is Spiritual - and falls easily to acceptance. How beautiful to know such love. I enjoyed this very much. I love love. ~Pamela