Orphani

Nov 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Let me enter you

Let me enter you, as
My love found your heart,
A child, unspoken and deep
nearer than our eyes,in
there closeness forever

Let me enter your morning
With it's gift of quiet hours

Let me find you in
My arms loneliness
Sleepy with parting lips
opening the path of my dreams,
The meaning of my fingers

Let me enter you,
Ascendant with a fragrant joy
That opens all doors
With flowers and summers, and
Winters most serene setting
Of blanketed love,
That melts all snow

— Orphani, Nov 24, 2009

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Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest B

beautifully executed ... and I am speachless sounds like cupids arrow has hit you love and hugs Jayne x x

Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

This poem is meant to bind

This poem is meant to bind the spiritual and sensual elements between a couple. Love is the most misunderstood word in the English langage.Like a diamond perfectly cut it has many facets, but it's essence is a giving desire for the wellbeing of the beloved, more than your own life. Love is mans only true goal.Misinformed people say Love has gone bad. Thats like saying good has gone bad. its not love that went bad, it's the lack of it. All my love Janey. Barry........o...

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest B

There are those who believe that the power of love and prayer and the thought put into it ... is a real concept ... I love and love deeply ... and this is a beautiful expression of binding the spiritual with the pyshical ... had to come back for a read lol I am reading a book at the moment second time round and its helped my writing no end ... opening my mind so to speak ... as each memory cracks ... theres some pain but the truth sets me free .. love and hugs Jayne x x

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

Let Me

Orphani Just so beautiful it touched my soul just reminding me of what I once knew and saddens me now but no one can take this away from me. So tender is the night in the embrace of love until the early morning light. always Electric Blue

Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

Yes, love is an all

Yes, love is an all pervading state of mind that becomes part of us.It is life as you are. My love E.B. Barry........o...

odd molly

16 years 6 months ago

Dear OrphaniYour poem is

Dear Orphani Your poem is very beautiful and well written. Yes, what is more worthwhile to write about than love? The meaning of life and perhaps the only reason we are here. You are an admirable poet, and it's always interesting to visit your page. Thank you for sharing with us your heart. It is a joy. Love. o molly

Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

Love is the universe. and

Love is the universe. and evil is its absense.Love is the heart of God and the reason for existance. We are in the third act. The curtain is drawing down. The fourth act is a world full of love. Barry......o...

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

To ask the question is to

To ask the question is to pretend it hasn't already happened. Love questions not. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

Yes,As love is the only

Yes,As love is the only answer, and all there is of any value to us. Sex with out love, is as to see the sun, but not feel its warmth. Your poetry often speaks of these complemetary forces in balance. My warmest embrace Anne. Barry...o..

Orphani

16 years 6 months ago

I have studied the art of

I have studied the art of making love from a too tender age. I love all women and appreciate there individual unique beauty that comes from the inside. It is there that all love making begins.It is that touch that begins the true journey.You know deeply of what I speak. Love with magic fingers. Barry........o...

ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi there ,,,,,,,o

ah love i like love in poetry but love in music really gets me pop music i feel has deminished the meaning of the word nearly every other song is all about love its wonderfull in its self , another fine write ,o ,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

too late she cried!

Not quite though O! Luckily found this along the pathway of life, like a sweet smelling discarded rose!~ Beautiful! Bon