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Fight Scene.

Don't take pity,
Just leave with me,
Pleased to see,
Past faces put through thier fast paces.

Sneering with glee,
A werewolf tieing his shoelaces,
Confusion bleeds,
Onto bare chested frauds.

So escape with me,
Don't wait for the settled dust,
Earn a crust,
Fleeing bewildered muts.

And the next time that they show thier faces,
If they do,
They're outta luck.

— bloke, Nov 23, 2009

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Strong write, bloke

I can see and feel the encounter. great line A werewolf tieing his shoelaces, weak line and should go Earn a crust, feels like you were stretching for a rhyme. Strong write. With a bit of editing a powerful write, Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible