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Nov 23, 2009
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Fight Scene.
Don't take pity,
Just leave with me,
Pleased to see,
Past faces put through thier fast paces.
Sneering with glee,
A werewolf tieing his shoelaces,
Confusion bleeds,
Onto bare chested frauds.
So escape with me,
Don't wait for the settled dust,
Earn a crust,
Fleeing bewildered muts.
And the next time that they show thier faces,
If they do,
They're outta luck.
Just leave with me,
Pleased to see,
Past faces put through thier fast paces.
Sneering with glee,
A werewolf tieing his shoelaces,
Confusion bleeds,
Onto bare chested frauds.
So escape with me,
Don't wait for the settled dust,
Earn a crust,
Fleeing bewildered muts.
And the next time that they show thier faces,
If they do,
They're outta luck.
— bloke, Nov 23, 2009
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weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
Strong write, bloke