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Nov 23, 2009
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TIME BEING
Time being
is spent
in the mean time,
lean times
cast off on the side lines
of what's really
important -
the precious passing moments
in the ephemeral limits of
now
Affect is the new effect
of experiential learning
It'll never define
the yearning,
the rawness
of feeling,
the existential reeling
in the time of being,
now!
Let's defer our thrill
to another day's kill
let's squander
Time with boredom
just for pleasure.
She's too difficult to measure
let's just say -
her being is happening right
Now!
BjR 23 November, '09
is spent
in the mean time,
lean times
cast off on the side lines
of what's really
important -
the precious passing moments
in the ephemeral limits of
now
Affect is the new effect
of experiential learning
It'll never define
the yearning,
the rawness
of feeling,
the existential reeling
in the time of being,
now!
Let's defer our thrill
to another day's kill
let's squander
Time with boredom
just for pleasure.
She's too difficult to measure
let's just say -
her being is happening right
Now!
BjR 23 November, '09
— Bonitaj, Nov 23, 2009
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Critiques
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
A flowing seemingly flipiant poem
Bonitaj
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you Seabhac
bjp
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Bonita,
Bonitaj
16 years 6 months ago
Ah Brian
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Its our time Boni …. and
magics02
16 years 6 months ago
BEAUTIFUL