"Where Angels Lay"

Her angels breath sent shivers down my spine. The sound of her voice, intoxicating like wine. My words used to fail, stutter, and stumble. Her beauty unrealised, how was she so humble. Natures beauty surpassed, just by her smile. I looked deep in her gaze, Its like I could see for a mile. Her touch was so soft, silky and smooth. How could anyone allow her to loose. Her death the more tragic, by some evil hand. Her beauty is lost, buried in sand. Her grave has no stone, she sleeps, now just bone. gone and forgotten, she's eternally alone.

— KINGZOMBIE, Nov 23, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets: I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also, for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium, it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it, lol., " I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp, Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god, Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality, Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove, baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room, the bullgod has your head, and baby thats just fine, now it is time, we became the mighty cell, wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove, they say we've got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, baby, the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there, arms up overhead, a goddess in the ancient song, work that mighty world to the mindless groove, they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, they say weve got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Critiques

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Zombie

Bravo ... brilliant write one of your best ... I loved this one ... one thing? last line 'eternally' second line 'intoxicating' just those two little things need to be tidied up love and hugs Jayne x x

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks again

I thought I spelled them wrong, I'm on a playstation 3 it doesn't have spell check, so I thank you again glad you liked it ...ZOMBIE

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

This poem has great

This poem has great potential. Just pare down the words, dear Zombie, to make a kingly poem. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 6 months ago

THANK YOU

I'm still trying to find a structure that fits me, I thank you for the advice.