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Nov 22, 2009
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my happy place
I can taste the salt in the air
I can hear the waves turning over
where the seagulls are busy complaining
where the tide is tugging at my feet
wanting me to deeper sites
where the sea meets the sky
the endless distance
this is my happy place
this feeling of elation
this bursting with happiness
the bustling of voices in the background
to be totally ignored
the sand is soft and warm
the dunes are a comfortable haven
from the cooling breeze that
kisses my face in total abandonment
this is my happy place
seashells are shimmering in the sand
little sea creatures are scurrying to the water
wishing to get back in the surf
seaweed is drying by the shore
this feeling of contentment
of total resignation to the touch of the sun
and the caress of the balmy wind
enters my soul and brings a smile to my face
this is my happy place
— smilecatcher, Nov 22, 2009
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weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
This is such a lovely poem
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Well, I just recently