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Nov 22, 2009
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Lilac Moons from a Master
As Infinitesimal leaves
plucked by a great seer
it started,
half-light birthed
and a lilac moon
erupted,
from a crown of pine
all this,
concealing
a master at work
I observed,
invisible hands
slowly smear
the canvas,
Water Lilies splash
in my pastel sky,
astonished
existing for eons,
since waters lapped
at Uluru,
since hanging rock
was submerged
never knowing a glory
of impression,
wedges of oceans
separated
and now,
lifetimes later,
Monet
paints the sky
in my awe
as bat wings spread
moving night,
through life's grandeur
— Seren, Nov 22, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Lady Jayne, your poetry is
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Mom
CyberSpace
16 years 6 months ago
love the wording my love
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
ello Darlin
bjp
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe,
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Brian
Gerry
16 years 6 months ago
Poetic Images
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Gerry
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Hey there
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Lyz
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
What do you mean
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Lyz
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Cocky?
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
I shall stretch just for you
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hi jayne
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Ziggy
Electric Blue
16 years 6 months ago
Lilac Moon
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Magz
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Okay
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Pmsl I couldnt post till the
orgami
16 years 6 months ago
bats
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest O