"Darkness Fails"

In this darkness of the night. I embrace you, when it takes you, from me. In this darkness, no light. I cant find you, It cant be. The silence of the night, it entwines you, in agony. In the shadows, you wake up, in ecstasy. You wake up, but cant see. You wake up, to me. Reborn, in my home. You are reborn, alone You fall from the grace of night. You fall, from me. The shadows, are illuminated. The sun rises, becoming light. The sun rises, for me.

— KINGZOMBIE, Nov 22, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets: I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also, for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium, it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it, lol., " I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp, Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god, Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality, Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove, baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room, the bullgod has your head, and baby thats just fine, now it is time, we became the mighty cell, wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove, they say we've got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, baby, the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there, arms up overhead, a goddess in the ancient song, work that mighty world to the mindless groove, they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, they say weve got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Critiques

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear King

Wow that has a fast rhythm like a drum beat ... I loved it nice work ... In this darkness, no light. I cant find you, It cant be. The silence of the night, it entwines you, in agony. my favourite lines love and hugs Jayne x x

KINGZOMBIE

16 years 6 months ago

THANK YOU

I didn't think anybody would like this one.I have been experimenting with some different ideas. Those are my favorite lines too. Thanks again ...ZOMBIE