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Killin' and Chillin'
Meet me at the coffee-house, I think you know the one
Where I saw you seeing me, and I said you look like fun
I'd like to know you better, maybe we could date
Let's paint the town bloody-red, do it up first-rate
I know of a little place, we could grab a bite to eat
And listen to some rockin' stuff... chewing to the beat
I think we should have some fun, maybe a drink or two
We can explore feeling good, feeling me... feeling you
Dessert might be at your place, or maybe even mine
It doesn't matter much, by then we'll be feeling fine
I have a little tidbit I've saved just for tonight
His blood still fresh in the package, the flesh firm and tight
Now we need some music, a little candle-glow
We will dance a little closer, really nice and slow
The sweetness of his lips, pulled off and chewed up nice
His blood drained fresh, from the vein...I like it warm...no ice
Have some strips of bloody meat, raw like a Sushi dish
Or I'll pluck his eyes for you, if that's what you wish
The wok is filled with garlic and some fresh cut leeks
Now I'll add the chunks of fat, and the sliced butt-cheeks
Erotic pleasure and the like, is where you find it Dear
I didn't think that I was close, that it would be so near
I'll respect you in the morning, I promise... be sure of it
I'll prize the night, each hour, and every single minute
Critiques
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
i love it.....
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Yes please do...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
DeMona is
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Gee this made me think of
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Killer has...
Baz
16 years 6 months ago
Mmmm
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
No offense taken...