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Bert Lamrick
Nov 20, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Progeny

morning draws
it's first breath
as sunshine breaks
over Earth's edge

where distant hills
embrace the sky

late Autumn
lays down
beneath boughs
spread out
in welcome

a warming blanket

sheltering seedlings
in nourishing slumber
incubating rebirth
renewal

come April rain

— Bert Lamrick, Nov 20, 2009
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Lonnie

16 years 8 months ago

Nicely Done, Bert!

Great flow, good balance, and a timeless theme all make for a very enjoyable read! Kudos!
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GRiM

16 years 8 months ago

...

Thank you...i want to be a poet. How do i do it?
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

Find your own voice

Look around you. Within you. Describe your impressions. But, write. Always write. Keep in touch. ~Rick
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

Thank you, Lonnie

Very much. I appreciate you. ~Rick
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

Thank you, Lonnie

very much. I appreciate you. ~Rick
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Rick

One word. Awesome. It has a whole lot of feeling. Love Lyz. XX
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Bert Lamrick

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks, Lyz

as always... ~Rick

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