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Nov 20, 2009
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in my world
close your eyes and open your mind
look through the window of my world
a winding leaf adorned path
with an occasional rose by the side
a vast blue sky misted white
just listening no talking
in my world
lacy weeds poking up their heads
doowey deer with darting ears
a mirror of glistening waters
with see through reflections
a cacophony of colorful plumed birds
just for me to be heard
in my world
— smilecatcher, Nov 20, 2009
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Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Lovely poem.close your eyes