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in my world

close your eyes and open your mind look through the window of my world a winding leaf adorned path with an occasional rose by the side a vast blue sky misted white just listening no talking in my world lacy weeds poking up their heads doowey deer with darting ears a mirror of glistening waters with see through reflections a cacophony of colorful plumed birds just for me to be heard in my world
— smilecatcher, Nov 20, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Lovely poem.close your eyes

Lovely poem. close your eyes and open your mind look through the window of my world a winding leaf-adorned path, an occasional rose by the side a vast blue sky misted white just listening in my world lacy weeds poke heads dew-eared deer, darting a mirror of glistening waters see-thru reflections a cacophony of crimson-plumed birds just for me to hear, my world Just some ideas for a slight change... ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha