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Nov 20, 2009
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the beasts of lavender
The Self
is so selfless
that it allows
itself
to be divided
into awareness
ad infinitum.
Amongst white clouds,
the endless dance of two rivers
begins
Eros points my breasts
licks his tongue
sends a warm lavender wind
to remind me
is so selfless
that it allows
itself
to be divided
into awareness
ad infinitum.
Amongst white clouds,
the endless dance of two rivers
begins
Eros points my breasts
licks his tongue
sends a warm lavender wind
to remind me
— Kailashana, Nov 20, 2009
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Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Heya Ma lolThought before
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Mooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
Its journeys sent its scent far and wide,
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Someone asked me if it
bjp
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Brian, you didn’t,
Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Anna
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Cat! You trust
Dalton
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Kailashana
Dalton
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Kailashana
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you John. What can we
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
I see this poem as the clash
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
The only error humanity has
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Hi
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Congratulations on spotlight
Bonitaj
16 years 6 months ago
Congratulations
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
the beasts of lav..........
odd molly
16 years 6 months ago
Yes and Yes dear lavender
G.D.K
16 years 6 months ago
Go ahead and tell me what
Orphani
16 years 6 months ago
Congratulations on
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
deserving