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A perfect kiss

A perfect kiss

Perfect kiss I can only describe

If you describe perfect to me

The first kiss I had years ago

Was just the sliding of our lips?

For me it was a perfect kiss.

 

As you advance in dates,

Also in your relationship,

A kiss becomes more intense

Yes it also becomes French.

 

Then the sweetness you share,

Notes with your friends compare,

Did so and so

Kiss so and so,

Did his kiss taste like?

The one he gave me.

 

Well the story can never end

A perfect kiss is the most loving kiss

The first one I know

My mom gave to me.

 

Ah you will laugh at

Deary me

Perfect kiss is an exchange

Of love

Of juices through your lips

What is a kiss after all?

It’s just a lovely

Friendly

Juicy

Sexy kiss

 

— loved, Nov 19, 2009

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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

You ooze passion....

This is a lovely post. I really enjoyed reading this. It made me smile and also drift off into my own 'perfect' world of love and romance. I get the feeling you have an awful lot of love and affection to offer. Which is a truly wonderful thing indeed. There are not enough of us about Much love Millage x
loved

loved

16 years 6 months ago

thanks

thanks for enjoying my perfect kiss many more shall come your way if you say I arrive I arrive, my love So far I was waiting for you Now I know you do not want With me to anything do I am awaiting my love As I always do Wherever you may be I shall remember you. You were once the cynosure Of my eyes now no more Where on this earth Can you find anyone? Whose eyes are like mine? Please do say Come into my life again If you wish you may