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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Nov 19, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Thunderous Life

A Thunderous Life


Burrow out  the deepest sea
Throw me in
Drop in a piece of the sun
Boil me asunder
Take my bones to the highest peak
Bury them under a heap

The thunderous persist
The rain continue to exist
Lightening increase its strikes
Ripping open my very hype
Birds feasted on my glow
Under a colorless rainbow

So, burrow out the deepest sea
Throw me in
Drop in a piece of the sun
Boil me  asunder
Take my bones to the highest peak
Bury them under a heap

Because the thunderous persist
The rain continue to exist
Lightening increase its strikes
Ripping open my very hype
Birds feasted on my glow
Under a colorless rainbow
— Barbara Writes, Nov 19, 2009

About This Poem

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Barb

How are you. This reads as a song. Also thunderous like a wild ride. Grat vividness with your words. Very interesting my dear. Tumultuous write indeed. Love from Lyz. XX
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ngaioBeck

16 years 6 months ago

Thunderous

Your work is remarkable!
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Ngaio

Really appreciate your comments and reading my work. I tend to write often what my kids call weird. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 6 months ago

Lyz

thanks lyz i appreciate your comments ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara