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Ivory Etchings

watching as twilight
crept over the brothers
and stars being re-birthed
to fortify the Great Wall

 

street lights line to ignite,
the shimmering black mantel
concealing azimuth,
and seductive ebony lips
slide,over the lamp

 

once more,
A visage of ivory
looks upon earth
on the cusp
is where your found,
a palled specter
drifting shadow to shadow
passing as
a will-o-wisp of
ebony vistas,
always out of touch

 

with the sense of perception
lulled into deception,
as one fingernails breadth
breaches truth,
trouncing the foolhardy

 

the blaze phases,
and passion is pendulous

 

but still,
twilight bewitches,
and the ivory succubus
of night
mesmerizes all,
with moon eyes

 

as the mantel
of seduction,
rolls with reverence
over azimuth,
her willing victims
are waiting,

 

etched in ivory

— Seren, Nov 19, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Cat

I scrapped this one for the time being its not cooperating lol so its dead in the water ... maybe in a couple of months ill come back and see what I cant do with it ... Love an biggest hugs Jayne x x
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Empress of the Pen

What are you doing to me, lol. I give you 5 ahead of schedule, you funny bugger, lol. I, like Cat, will be back. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Lyz

Well you better come on down then cause its back to stay LOL ... love and hugs Jayne x x xlmao ;)
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Back I is

This is very dreamy to read and I am glad to see it finally, the title was a little lonely, lol, but it was worth the wait. Your spindle is getting a workout I must say. Etched in ivory, ah, that last line just put a sigh into this. Very gentle read and it is as beautiful as its title suggests. Great write dear heart. Love from Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

My dear woman give your

My dear woman give your fingers a rest ... LOL your have worked overtime ... and i am honoured you like my scribbles makes a old girl very happy love and hugs Jayne x x
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Scribble dribble

Love em all, lol. I am trying to not get too behind. I hate missing out and sharing. I like to share, lol. So if they are scribbles, so be it. Keep scribbling. By the way, I stayed up to read your next, ah, where is it? Catch ya. Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

I got told I wasnt allowed

I got told I wasnt allowed to call them scribbles but thats what they have always been and will always remain ... lol its that little voice in my head saying dont get too big for your boots lol hahaha good advice I always take ;) love and hugs J x x x