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Look up

Look up,when folding sky of hopeless cover
Fills this dream of winter night
When all seems lost in darkness
And shadows hide the light
For there is a love that hovers
Beauty finds  wings over the lost dream

With a breath the dark is sent away
The morning rises on a breeze
what more than this the gift of birds
With blue of  skies, and symphonys
look up, the nights unfolded to the light of day
And there the sun is rising to all the earth redeem
— Orphani, Nov 19, 2009

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Mrs Dalloway

16 years 6 months ago

‘Love that hovers’. So

'Love that hovers'. So beautiful! I like the rhythm and the feel of the poem. It gives hope! Mrs Dalloway
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear B

Another lovely write from your pen ... am tired tonight will be back with more substanial comment tomorrow huni ... love and hugs Jc x x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

I too, like the rhythm and flow of this piece. The theme is wrapped in sweet sincerity and I love the descriptions. Always, Cat
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Rhyme Shryme

It is excellent and all is good, no faults at all. Perfect. A gentle read. Love Lyz. XX