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Hey You!


Hey You!

Do you mind if I look at you?
I wish to check you out

Please let me explain.....

If the eye is the window to the your soul
And your body is a temple
Then your heart must be the key to the door
Now your soul must be that lovely warm place inside

So, after looking in your window, I wish to enter your temple
With my key and walk through your door
And find that warm place and lay down

Hey You, still interested?

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Stuart

Interested and waiting for the next installment lol.... Love and hugs Jayne x x x
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 5 months ago

Hi Jayne, thanks..not sure

Hi Jayne, thanks..not sure when the next installment is...could be a year...could be a 1000...who knows Congrats on the Evolution piece....really coming together best regards Stu
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

You betcha. But enter at

You betcha. But enter at your own risk! ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 5 months ago

hello

Quite clever and interesting. I love the attitude! Always, Cat
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Stu

Clever, and cheeky. Love your style, lol. Love Lyz. XX