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Roots of Musicality

We grew up doing loads of things
that normal brothers, do;
we shared a bedroom growing up
played, and fought well together, too.

But, as we grew we realized
our own individuality,
not just our five year difference in age
or who we were like, in our family.

I was greatly drawn towards the drums
Tony took to the guitar,
when we needed a bass-player in the band
well, the stretch wasn't all that far;

and the more that we would practice
the tighter we became,
pretty soon, the bass and drums did blend
'til our rythm was one and the same.

We began to listen, endlessly
to every song that we had played,
'til we could play them effortlessly
so, our amatureousity had time to fade;

and still, we share the music
our adolescence had brought our way,
at times, I can still recall the groove
that we'd feel when we would play.

Pulled into different directions
he's made his home in Tennessee,
we're quite through playing together
but, we play on.....separately;

and every time that I play a song
be it fast, or be it slow.....
some of my talents displayed, today
I learned courtesy.....my li'l bro !
— docmaverick, Nov 18, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

I love this poem, Doc.

I love this poem, Doc. There's such a bond between same sex siblings, even more so when they share musicality. Spelling: Amateurishness or amateurism Hugs to you and your li'l bro. Perfect title! ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 6 months ago

Of Course ....

I appreciate the bond...with Love....also am happy the dog is gone and a new you is in the picture!!!
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 6 months ago

You're both....

...full of vim and vinegar, today.....and, I likee ! It's not an epic, but I still appreciate your dribble ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.