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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Nov 17, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

All The Grey that Matters has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

All The Grey that Matters

Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/all-the-grey-that-matters/

                by Sinbad the Sailor Man


 
— Sinbadthesailorman, Nov 17, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Silent_Rain

16 years 8 months ago

Great poem!!

Nice poem it is sad and tragic, but beautiful... ~Rain~
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Silent_Rain

16 years 8 months ago

Dear donnie...

I am one to dance in the rain, but when the storm lasts for more then half of your short life you may become discreged... you may not know it but what was said about eyes of blue was the prfect thing to say... and for that I thank you... ~Rain~
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Ananzi

16 years ago

Other

than a few minor problems with the grammar this poem is really good. I like your aging connotations. The "seasoned" effect that it brings. It truly is a sad poem. But some beauties come with age.
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Ananzi

16 years ago

Na

Lol, its not all that bad. I still think the write is excellent though.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years ago

I have been working on my puncuations But I have been, since the

First grade. For me its a matter of doing it daily, other wise my brain says it is not important enough to remember so I don't unnecessarily forget it. I just can't seem to find it or recall it until I no longer want it or need it. Thank God this only happens with certain things. Like the English language! But, I try to get here every chance I get, and I re-read the work books I have. But it still does not seem to Burn a good enough path,for instant accessibility. Thanks again Donnie/Sinbad

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