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ziggy
Nov 17, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

MY SHINING STAR

From a distance i
see you in my mind
a picture that speaks
a thousand words
uttered once in time .

you stole a heart and
then we parted no way
to end this now its started.

The seldom time we meet
i feel so full complete angel
eyes wrapped in beauty i
love you from a far you are
my shining star.
— ziggy, Nov 17, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello Ziggy

This is a very sweet poem in itself, yet somehow I feel it is in need of another stanza. It could just be me, as my judgment has been a little off lately. And did you mean angle, or Angel? Good title! Always, Cat
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi cat

hi cat lol a big typo there cheers i will correct not sure if there is another stanza in this but many thanks for the read and correction ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Great

I love this and are you speaking to many??
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi there

hi, glad you liked and commented i`m not really speaking to many on this just sharing it with many this is about someone loved and lost but still close to my heart
Rett

Rett

16 years 6 months ago

ziggy, beautiful sentiment

I enjoyed the read. A lot of us still have some of those sweet memories. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

my shining,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

hi there rett , sorry for delay in reply but this wireless modem is a joke lol (arghhhhhh) yes indeed sweet memories never fade cheers for the read ......zigs
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

My Shinning Star

Ziggy To see inside my heart and read and see the words written there of a very special someone who is and will always reside How did you do this? Blue
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hello blue

what can i say on this mmmmmmm its about a very special someone a very long time ago cheers for the comment mags ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy