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Tunnels


Riding on the underground, long into the tunnel dark.
The scrawled tiles set up station walls
Poets dealing one-word thoughts.
A thought caught pure brute fell ink blots.

Fighting echoes is the lonely driver's flight.
The Poet's long taken the nightside, and emerged lightside she framed 
His chalky face with thumbs and fingers, and well bitten thumbs and fingers
Well met returned and felt no pain,
Chewed down quicks quickly nubs thick,
The future anticipated transit.
— fledermaus, Nov 17, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

(Although my nails are long

(Although my nails are long enough.) Interesting poem, Poet. I'll have to chew on it some more. I like your pen name. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha