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MY GRANDSON BROKE HIS LEG

MY GRANDSON BROKE HIS LEG

Every day of my grandson's life
Has ended  with security
And that he is forever ,loved
Without this uncertainty
Because our  love,  is  always unconditionally
So he can fly form the comfort of his bed
With all the airplanes in his dreams

This innocent gilt of the future that had no past
Until that day he  had to sleep in a hospital bed
On this Friday ,  is the day.
My ,  grandson broke his leg

Their will not be comfort for him in this bed
With the IV into his arms
Is his  uncertainty ,until the pain medications are feed
Is his  uncertainty ,  more than  the confinements of  a cast ? 

He is less than two in years
So his words are simple more direct
Why
Why, do I have to sleep in this bed
Why
Why, is this cast on my leg
Why
Why, dose my body hurt so bad

His wishes are tears the airplanes he once  had

 



— press, Nov 15, 2009

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Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Press

Give the poor baby a cuddle from me ... and I have done a small edit for you just suggestions my friend but hopefully will help Every day of my grandson life----- grandson's Has ended with security And that he is forever,loved Without uncertainty Always unconditionally So he can fly form the comfort of his bed in all the airplanes of his dreams --- with to in and in to of This innocent gilt of the future that had no past Until that day he had to sleep in a hospital bed On this Friday,is the day. My,grandson broke his leg There will be no comfort for him in this bed ---- be not to be no With the IV into his arms Is his uncertainty,until the pain medications are feed Is his uncertainty,the confinement of a leg in a cast ? ---- Cast He is less than two in years So his words are simple more direct Why Why,do I have to sleep in this bed Why Why,is this cast on my leg--- casks to cast Why Why,dose my body hurt so bad His wishes are tears the airplanes he once held ----had ... to held Love and hugs Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Awww Lubbily

Hugs and kisses little man, poor baby. Press, read that dear little grandson of yours a story. hope he gets well soon and great write. Love Lyz. XX