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The Poet Ibn Zayduns' Imprisonment

Pale moon reflects your lips
Majnun was outcast by one such as you
But there is no blame that may be bound to you
As the blame was not with her, Layli
If the heart is so fragile a thing
It may turn to ashes at a touch
Or the prohibition of such

It is not that your flesh is a sweeter lure
It is not that your mind is a receptacle
More fitting for thoughts abhorent or pure
It is not that you turn to me
Only to greater fly away
My midnight owl
my phantom of love

It is not that you are without twin
And cannot bear to stand beside anyone or anything
That upon the scales you rise and rise
And cannot help but rise
Whilst I am here
Shackled beneath your eyes
Brand me with the hexagon
For I am a slave to you

There is but one sun
And it shines most delightfully
In the unveiling of your face
It is so that your beauty unveils the sun
For it gazes on nothing so clearly
Upon your forehead and your throat
And your shoulder
Upon your thighs
Which are as a flowing river
To drink from
Has lead me here
Embraced by chains
And this prison, vulgar
A filter for profanity...

(For the Andalusian poet Abu al-Waleed Ahmad Ibn Zaydun al-Makhzumi  (1003-71)



















— Dalton, Nov 14, 2009

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Dalton

Raw beauty. You have written a beautifully worded poem. I found it flowed well and content is incredible. You are a very talented writer and I enjoyed this. Love Lyz. XX
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 6 months ago

The Sufi Poets

are surely singing your praises. Dalton! the imagery, formatting and theme in this poem is so beautifully scripted you must have learnt from the masters!! Rumi and Hafiz are seemingly among your peers! Well done! Bonita j
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Dalton!!!!!~A“…when it

Dalton!!!!! ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

imprisoned

Dalton My soul is imprisoned by another soul.... my name he said should be sunshower... I embrace my chains and long to sip from the endless flowing river unquenchable thirst have I Amazing my friend Wow I find the last stanza really attracts me so You send my mind racing with this one. always Blue
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

Ta Maggie

Ibn Zaydun was an actual historical character, a poet who fell foul of his rival in love as well as letters. For the love of Wallada Bint al-Mustakfi that he was imprisonned. Upon release he emigrated from Spain (in the time of the Muslim occupation of the Iberian Peninsula) to else in the Arabic world. If you haven't already seen it their story is described in full in my Ibn Zaydun blog. Thankyou for your kind words, john