Beyond

I see you are aquiring more skills with each write.Detailed and in depth expose on the inner soul of love unrequited, metaphored as the animal person, raw and savage, adds an interesting dimention. I see that your form and structure are showing more cohesion and development. Your very vivid metaphors are also distinctly preasant.I still think you can highten, strengthen, and bring your work into line with the best of published work by continueing to fine tune your structured sentences to a higher precission.Also working on the over all structure and form of the poem.These are constant concerns of mine that cause me to pull out words as, I pull out hair. In my opinion every word must find it's proper meaning and place. Becoming more important as the poem theme becomes more complex. One of your best poems delightful to read. Shear pleasure. Barry......o

Agreed Barry. Molly o... your work is bordering sublime. Just follow your heart until it removes everything except the essence of your words. You know how. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

You Know Molly, For a moment and instant you caught my breath, as light as a feather but can never be held for long. The ever cycle of life roots us to this earth and the immortal soul roams unfettered within the cosmos. The moon may give all a silvery after glow but the floating sapphire moonbeams that our souls dance upon watching below gives us the inner strength for the mortal realm indeed. And that fine line a tightrope that we must all walk... with balancing hands, some that shelter, some that slay either side we must choose into which hands we fall. I love the deep, mellow and sombreness of this write as it etches its own feeling and sentience within all the readers hearts and makes look beyond our own pettiness and to look to a realm beyond imagination... a fate we cannot escape, so do not jump or even fall in to deaths hands but to skip and smile happily into its arms. Peace of mind, body, soul, spirit and heart can be found then. Simply magnificent... always a fan of yours Molly and always will be. Oh and yes Molly winter has set in here strong winds and heavy rain has hit us and days as well as nights are getting colder. But I can always warm myself up by coming here and finding heart warming poetry on your page. Dale :)

Well, I cannot pick a fave of yours, as they are all captivating lately. I say you are writing with such feeling and I have enjoyed reading each piece you have written. Well done. Lyz. XX

I am so sorry I missed this one till now ... its sublime mystery wrapped in saffron ... beautifully done love and hugs Jayne x x

I can only think of one word; "Enchanting!" Always, Cat