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I Fluffed!

Light-hearted drivel, they say it's fluff

Beautiful days, from dawn 'till dusk

Feeling the mood, altering time

Who cares what you say, as long as it rhymes?

Rythmn and patterns, the flow is the thing

Colors and emotions, make my heart sing!

Cerulean blue skies, valiant knights

Wizards and dragons, engaged in fights

Heart filled to bursting, with brotherly love

Signs and symbols, flowers and doves

Praise for religion, mysteries of life

Killer stories, tales of the knife

The ether is filled, all through the night

With flashing messages, trimmed with blue light

Amazing...that my eyes can hear

The words that somehow get all the way here

I don't know....How they get in my head

Sometimes they come in colors, like Pissed-Off-Red

Sad Brow Brown, And Envy Green,

A whole lot of colors in between

A glimpse through the window, into houses of life

Voyeurs... peeking past drapes, into pain and strife

Joy at the meeting of minds in cross-roads

Loving someone, and writing them odes

All these things have possibilities

I can't imagine... no thoughts like these

My brain is lit up, firing synapses

Gotta write this down, before the tower collapses

I'm off, fingers tapping... in words only I feel

Making my marks, making big deals

Blue Skies, rosey dawns

Waking up, early-birds...Worms on the lawns

 

— Geezer, Nov 13, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Sir Knight :D

WOW ... this is amazing Gee ... I have to say this is your best rhymer ... its fucking awesome you know I dont swear less I mean it lol ... now open that throttle up and give it some ... your really growing Gee ... I will go over this tomorrow for any improvments I am tired but this is really good ... love and hugs Jayne x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Feeling Knightly...

I don't know what to say! I just was having such fun! It was meant to liven things up, and show that not everything is Killer. ~ I have been wondering what the changes I have been feeling have meant. Just not been feeling myself, but not really sick either. LOL maybe I have been pregnant! LOL ~ Gee.
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

if your preggers?? I want a

if your preggers?? I want a slice of the cash hahahaha just joking huni ... i just went over this and I can see one or two things I might tweak have copied it ... to give it its due ... will post later have people coming for dinner ... and a few drinks, I can feel drunken poetry coming on LMAO !! love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

rhyming.....

i love it!!!! You have a great ability to write in various styles and about all types of different things. Every time you write, it is like opening a present, u never know what's inside and its always a surprise.....well done.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

I do believe...

that is one of the nicest things I have heard about my writing! I feel like Forest has just said that my poems are like his box of chocolates! Thank you, so very much. ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

i only say

What is true. You have such a great ability to write about pretty much everything and anything that comes to your mind or emotions and make it GOOD!!!! I struggle with different types of poetry, even though it might be what i am thinking or feeling at the time. I have the hardest time expressing love but give me something angry to write about and I can run with it. You have a great talent!!!
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hey geezer

hey wow this is like a lesson in rhyming i really really like this its has such a brill flow that makes me smile when i read every line cheers ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy ``
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you Ziggy...

It was just meant to be a fluff! Just something to have fun with...I guess that is why it turned out well. I wasn't thinking abiut anything but having a good time. I love rhyming and had a real good time with it. ~ Gee
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lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Gee

I am enjoying your intense writes and I smiled through this one. You always surprise, and what a surprise, rolled effortlessly of the tongue and I think you have done a brilliant job on this poem, and it aint so fluffy,lol. Love to all Lyz. XX