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I Fluffed!
Light-hearted drivel, they say it's fluff
Beautiful days, from dawn 'till dusk
Feeling the mood, altering time
Who cares what you say, as long as it rhymes?
Rythmn and patterns, the flow is the thing
Colors and emotions, make my heart sing!
Cerulean blue skies, valiant knights
Wizards and dragons, engaged in fights
Heart filled to bursting, with brotherly love
Signs and symbols, flowers and doves
Praise for religion, mysteries of life
Killer stories, tales of the knife
The ether is filled, all through the night
With flashing messages, trimmed with blue light
Amazing...that my eyes can hear
The words that somehow get all the way here
I don't know....How they get in my head
Sometimes they come in colors, like Pissed-Off-Red
Sad Brow Brown, And Envy Green,
A whole lot of colors in between
A glimpse through the window, into houses of life
Voyeurs... peeking past drapes, into pain and strife
Joy at the meeting of minds in cross-roads
Loving someone, and writing them odes
All these things have possibilities
I can't imagine... no thoughts like these
My brain is lit up, firing synapses
Gotta write this down, before the tower collapses
I'm off, fingers tapping... in words only I feel
Making my marks, making big deals
Blue Skies, rosey dawns
Waking up, early-birds...Worms on the lawns
Critiques
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Sir Knight :D
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Feeling Knightly...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
if your preggers?? I want a
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
rhyming.....
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
I do believe...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
i only say
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hey geezer
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Thank you Ziggy...
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Gee