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Nov 12, 2009
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Mutual Mentality of the Heart
When you walk behind me
it's as if you expect me to lead
and that's too much for you to expect.
When you walk ahead of me
it would appear that you're superior
and that too, is too much for you to expect.
But, should you tarry next to me
we will be as equals,
partners in this thing called life;
and we will compliment each other
by our absence of shadowed motives,
and together we can survive whatever comes our way.
When you lean on me
I will stable your posture
if you help carry my weight, I'll make it brief
Let our journey begin
and let it display to all
the harmony that is ours from within.
We share both, a delightful strut
and a comfortable stride
and our gate is metered by mutual respect;
and somehow that comforts me
and I feel close to you
and I cherish the grace of your intentions, and the purity of you.
it's as if you expect me to lead
and that's too much for you to expect.
When you walk ahead of me
it would appear that you're superior
and that too, is too much for you to expect.
But, should you tarry next to me
we will be as equals,
partners in this thing called life;
and we will compliment each other
by our absence of shadowed motives,
and together we can survive whatever comes our way.
When you lean on me
I will stable your posture
if you help carry my weight, I'll make it brief
Let our journey begin
and let it display to all
the harmony that is ours from within.
We share both, a delightful strut
and a comfortable stride
and our gate is metered by mutual respect;
and somehow that comforts me
and I feel close to you
and I cherish the grace of your intentions, and the purity of you.
— docmaverick, Nov 12, 2009
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Antoinette Mar…
16 years 6 months ago
And Doc....If it were....
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Doc
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