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Nov 10, 2009
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Black Beauty
"Black Beauty"
Your ears alert your nostrils dilated
you beautiful stallion of mine
your withers all shiny
your head held high
you're one I shall love till I die
I saw you charging across the hill
of life's sweep of meadows and streams
and then when I found you
you quickly became
the object of all my dreams.
What beauty, Black Beauty, what grace
as you go at a regular pace
but when galloping, cantering, charging along
you inspired me to write you a wonderful song
your mane in the wind does a dance like your tail
and your hooves are held high like a dressage male
in short you are all I desire
and when steamed are the eyes I'll know
that you love me too with no remorse
you beautiful, beautiful horse.
— Nordic cloud, Nov 10, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Queen
Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
and a Beauty of a poem
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you for your comments
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
What a beauty