Kiss Me Now [now editted

Kiss me now

Kiss me tonight
Kiss me now
Some or any other how
And then say wow
Where can I kiss you now?
Sending a flying kiss to thee
Will you return it
With many more
Bunched up to me

— loved, Nov 10, 2009

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Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

Millage

16 years 7 months ago

Shivers...

....down my spine reading this one. Just a thought to change 'some or any how' to 'some or any other how' and 'Also then say wow' to 'And then say wow'. A lovely, lovely write and if the situation was right, flying kisses would be sent from yours truly. Much love Millage x

loved

16 years 6 months ago

thank kiss

thank you for ur wow somehow here's a kiss if you can catch it love you sir hope u enjoy and don't miss ur lovers lovely kiss ask me for more sure i shall send u many more love sir id love kisses too from any one like you

loved

16 years 3 months ago

no more shivers

it seeems no more of my poems have given u the requisite shiver as u havent commented since rgds pl do

loved

16 years 6 months ago

kissing

ur and my lovely subject appears to be a kiss something i now really miss

loved

16 years 6 months ago

another one

how is this one You Just Can't You can't leave me In the midst of the wood As you alone enjoy Your solitary walk Down my mane You can't leave me in the lurch Let me remain unquenched You enjoy your smile As much as you may But my love from flowing Now can't stay Smile if you may But now let me Have my way

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

your assessment please My pet subjects are Love, Sex, Kiss As I claim to be a specialist I still do not know, KISSES SEX AND LOVE What love is? Do you know? You may perhaps Read all my Kiss and love poems To make an anthology Then perhaps you can take Some more time To learn about Love and kisses Then you needn't ask me As its been a long time Since any one read thee