Seren

Nov 10, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Anticipated as One

rising,
through velvet night,
reaching to brush
as one finger,
slides anticipation
to stop

evermore

I do not search
the stars,
in a light force
reflected
and bounced
from the guf,
the ether
illuminates
in all

as the threads of life
gather,
to drape in rings,
twining to gasp
in the Ecstasy
of we
is one

and air ripples,
a wind caressed face
smile's to eddy,
Esperanza grows
wings,
a single feather
falls to ground ..
and the universe
watches

— Seren, Nov 10, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

CyberSpace

16 years 7 months ago

boo yah baby

love it some words i don't know but that's all good cause it's ###$$$%%^^^&&orsm love u love the hubby xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox and then some

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

LOL fibber I explained the

LOL fibber I explained the words to you ... glad you liked it baby(hugz) with all my love Jayne x x x

Bosscombat

16 years 7 months ago

shibby shibby cocoanut

ease up there turbo u might blow a talent vein loved it glad to hear from you... via snake :P was a little worried <3 top stuff anyways ♣

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Shibby shibby coconut my brother lol ... LMAO at the ease up turbo ... oi I am slow these days I am not miss hypo anymore ... and I am ok darlin dont worry too much just been quiet the last couple of weeks (huggles) mwah Love Jayne x x

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Outstanding freakin’ poem

Outstanding freakin' poem daughter. I have no words with which to do justice, just this one big Brava! ~Ma "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Mom

I cannot ask for anything else ... that Brava is all I need (hugs) big love and hugs Jayne x x x

Orphani

16 years 7 months ago

I disagree with boss. I say

I disagree with boss. I say open er up and full steam ahead cap. Yippy zippy do da day little Janeys on her way.Oh yes, the stars.Have to get in early to beat the rush Love...o

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Barry

Well I think you maybe a little right ... its been a kind of opening up the last couple of weeks and taking risks I wasnt game to before ... LMAO beat what rush hthanks for your wonderful comment made my day I had a giggle ... you just reminded me of chitty chitty bang bang lol hahah havent seent that movie since I was 8 lol amazed I remembered ... Love and hugs Jayne x x

Pseudonym

16 years 7 months ago

Jayne :)

wow...!!! very nice... love it... another great piece!!! whoohoo -applause in mind- Hugs and love take care.. Liz xoxo P.S.. now u are the one bugged first.. lmao

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Liz

Thanks for the comment hun ... I wasnt sure whether this one was finished enough ... pmsl I am off to bug you tonight ... sooooo whats this poem you were talking about and how long do I have to wait ... I dont do waiting real well lmao ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x

Pseudonym

16 years 7 months ago

Jayne :)

well Jayney.. i love it and its perfect.. lmao bug me all you want it wont ever feel like being bugged lmao lol you already made a comment about the poem!!! :O.. Hugs and lovies take care.. Liz =)

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Liz

Yeah but i wasnt sure it was the one you were talking about lol ... bugs are good ...without them we would be screwed lol the human race I mean hahaha love and big hugs Jayne btw sorry i didnt reply earlier I didnt get a email for this one :S

Pseudonym

16 years 7 months ago

Jayne :)

lol okey then.. hahaha i agree completely.. bugs are awesome... i was so stupid last night!!! gosh i was angry at someone then i thought i was past the gate but smarty pants me then reversed into the gate!!! im still upset with myself lol.. now i damaged my car :(.. lol anyhow.. Hugs and lovies.. Take care.. Liz xox

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dont feel too bad … when I

Dont feel too bad ... when I was younger my dad had a Business I was borrowing one of the cars to go out with the girls and took the side out of his Ute ... my Dad only yelled at me once in my life ... lmao it was that day hahahah but Mum she was a different story yelled every chance she got,but she was boss ;) Bugs are awesome and I also have a pet diamond python and I would love to get a pet spider but hubby is phobic lmao I am always having to get rid of them only thing hes not keen on love and big hugs Jayne x x

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

I didnt

post

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

These

four

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Times lol

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Dear One

Your talent thermometer goes from the top of your head to the tip of your toes. Another winner! Congrats on spotlight. Love, Cat

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Sis

What are you on about lol your the bloody talent,I was reading your book going to sleep last night ... and I have to say there were a few poems that made me go :O:O:O I am in awe ... havent read it all but I have decided to read a couple every night ... thanks for that darlin and thanks for the wonderful compliment all my love Jay-knee 2bums lol ;)

Bonitaj

16 years 7 months ago

ANTICIPATED AS ONE

MORE WINNER!!! - Let me too 'get in there' and congratulate you! Love the gentleness of this one! Congrats on the spotlight - again! Boni x

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Boni

LOL ... hey it was brief ... but thanks huni and I am glad you liked the quote I left on your blog there is more to that if you like can copy it for you if you like I dont mind its really quite amazing .. love and hugs Jayne x x x

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

You are Naughty

Seems a little sexiness has exuded from this write, and voyeurism. Lol. you are going guns in the experimenting stage and by no means have you missed the gravy train. You have been writing up a storm these last few days and I am glad to have that high spirited cheeky pic and the girl back. Keep em comin and I like this ending, will not say love it, not plausible. I like it it is new and fresh and it has spark, which has been missed. Love to all. Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Nana (hugs) from us both Me and Jade :P

There is always something or someone watching though isnt there ... even on your own the bird outside the window ... the dog sitting at your feet ... there is always eyes open when others are sleeping ... and YIPPEE .,.. yes this one can be read one of three ways lol I prefer my own version but what people take away ... i guess is what their mind makes of it ... thank you for the wonderful comment and I just left a message for you on your profile lmao love and hugs Jayne x x

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Well whatever bitch

I like my version, so there. Of one, in joining, no? And I must say you have fingers on the mind today, why. re read this gem and tell me what I see, lol. Love ya, Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

double post lmao

oooooooopps ....

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

HMmmm joined … more than

HMmmm joined ... more than joining ... all is one, ... ;) and yes the meaning I meant was basicly ... that no need to search,in reality its all one anyway ... everything touches even if just by air ... PMSL at the fingers thing ... I am sooo fucking NOT commenting on that woman love and higgest bugs ya nutter ... btw everyones heres laughing Bj Snake Rachel and Jade lmfaoooooo Jay-knee 2bums lmao ;)

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

laughing again lol

You are not seeing what I see, I suppose that is a good thing, lol. Many smiles for you. And the fingers, mmmm, we will talk later, well you have got me going again today, good, and I hope you have donned a smile as well. Did you get YOUR hug? Lol. Hope so. Love Lyz, XX

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

What drugs they got you on ??

Cause if your seeing stuff must be the good shit ... but I am good lol I am always telling the doc I am right thanks ... he reckons I am a masochist however thats spelt ... but pain is gooood lets you know your alive LMAO ok you sooo better be smiling woman I just made an ass of myself lmao love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x

lyz

16 years 6 months ago

Hi

Just got this, lol. no, no drugs. Lol. Glad you got to get a laugh as did I. Love Lyz. XX

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Nana

LOL cool ... glad you got a giggle ;) my work here is done, off to amuse someone else, probably you I think lol love and hugs Jayne x x

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

anticipated

Jayne great poem just reminding me of all i do not have. You have someone to hug and to love you Just wish I did too hugs take care maggie

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Awwww Magz (huggles) you

Awwww Magz (huggles) you will make me cry :( thanks for the read darlin and smile crocodile ... Love and biggest hugs Jayne x x